I've just gone through a quick reading of "Antidote" and I think there are very good possibilities for this story to become a good one, however!!! Right from the very start there needs to be dialogue rather than just talking about how the people are feeling or reacting to situations. This would make the whole thing more interesting as I know if I started to read this lets say at a library I would soon get bored, sorry guys, I'm being honest here. When I have the chance and can get some ink for m…
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Posted on January 13, 2009 at 11:08am —
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